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Art Critique
Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2020 12:28 am
by bahamabucks
Here you can post you sketches / lineart / finished drawing and have it critiqued!

traditinal and digital and any form of art is welcome <3
I'll start....

OKAY FOLKS, I KNOW THE HANDS ARE TO SMALL BUT CRITIQUE AS HARD AS YALL WANT XD
Re: Art Critique
Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2020 10:23 pm
by Tisjstme
I don't know if this one has already been done or not...
The back sleeve needs to be more puffy like the front one and not a diagonal line.
The hand on the top of the picture needs to be just the fingers and not looking like it folds at the wrist.
The shading on the face needs to contour with the sunken eye and raised cheek than being from the starter head circle.
Pick a line for the shirt to fall and not wavy all the way down the middle.
Other than that it's not too bad.
Re: Art Critique
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2020 1:38 pm
by This_Ally
this is mine

what do y'all think ?

Re: Art Critique
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2020 3:57 pm
by MCG8

ally how do you shade like that????
Re: Art Critique
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2020 7:19 pm
by This_Ally
MCG8 wrote: ↑Tue Sep 01, 2020 3:57 pm

ally how do you shade like that????
idk i just can
Re: Art Critique
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2020 7:22 pm
by MCG8
all I can say for this drawing is, make the arms a tad thicker.
Re: Art Critique
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2020 7:33 pm
by This_Ally
Re: Art Critique
Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2020 9:23 pm
by Tisjstme
Awesome pics Ally. You're really good at it. Keep up the good work.
Re: Art Critique
Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2020 9:26 pm
by REDRATH
pls critique this mushroom

Re: Art Critique
Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2020 8:58 am
by This_Ally
MCG8 wrote: ↑Tue Sep 01, 2020 7:22 pm
all I can say for this drawing is, make the arms a tad thicker.
Oki doki